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Oh, Muse please grant to me
To tell of cruelest fate
About the bloody battle
To you I will relate

T'was such a awful carnage
The conflict did betray
Not single whole battalion
Escaped that fatal day

The order soon was given
We marched with quickest speed
Three hundred gallant fighting men
With sergeants in the lead

Through bushes, thorns and brambles
Our men they did advance
To break the mighty power plant
They gave a sporting chance

They were in the valley far below
When charged on with the steel
And every tree and rocky face
The enemy concealed

From every side were overwhelmed
Exertion was in vain
The blood did run in steady streams
Engulfing all the plain

"Forward men!" the sergeant yelled
Before he was cut down
He fell amongst his comrades there
Who laid upon the ground

The slaughter great was everywhere
In the valley and the field
But earnest soldiers loudly cried
That they would never yield

Commander Zan with valiant strength
Was bitter in the fray
He swore an oath to fight them on
And make them rue the day!

He saw his men break from the ranks
His heart with grief did quell
For he was wounded every-time
A noble Irken fell

'Retreat' did sound on every lip
And caused such great dismay
Of three hundred gallant fighting men
But twelve escaped that day

We toast to all those honest men
On that day they did deplore
Who saw the sun sink so very low
But saw it rise no more
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:iconitsmissblondi2u:
~itsmissblondi2u Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, the days of Invader Zim. I'm nostalgic for my old OC mary-sues now. XD
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*BlutEisen Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mary-Sues are the best. :D
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Mood: Noble *chaosfive55 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A fine homage to Tennyson's "Charge of The Light Brigade"!!
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*BlutEisen Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Into the valley of death rode the six-hundred...
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:iconchaosfive55:
*chaosfive55 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Someone had blundered!
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:iconbluteisen:
*BlutEisen Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...and caused confusion and delay! :iconfatcontrollerplz:
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*chaosfive55 Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthomasplz: Thomas was cross.
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:iconbluteisen:
*BlutEisen Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconangrythomasplz:
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:iconchaosfive55:
*chaosfive55 Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, that's the one! :D
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*PsychoSanyo Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice.
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