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I can see now a light
That is shinning so bright
In the dusk of the day it appears
Tis' like a warm embrace
That caresses my face
And slowly dispels all my fears

In the meadows I see
By the tall, swaying trees
A land that is wondrous and full
And my heart is at a ease
In the soft, summer breeze
As I lay in the shade, dark and cool

What a glorious sight
At end of the night
When the heavens will open for me
And the moon and the stars
Gently fade from a-far
As they slowly sink into the sea

At the twilight of life
When I give up my strife
And all of my burdens I lay down
When the cold hand of death
Takes the last of my breath
Will there be any stars in my crown?
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A little poem I wrote at 1:30 last night as I tried to get to sleep.

My own thoughts of eternity as inspired by the famous hymnal: "Will There Be Any Stars in my Crown?"
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Mood: Joy *Blacksand459 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Most excellent writing! I enjoyed this very much; the message is explicitly clear.
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*BlutEisen Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I knew you would it. :)
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*Blacksand459 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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Mood: Joy *chaosfive55 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good!!!
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*BlutEisen Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D
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:icondasblondebiest:
I had no idea that you could write such beautiful poetry! You really need to do more of this!
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*BlutEisen Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you, I did find this a little more stirring than my other works. Thanks for the favorite. :D
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